From the
beginning of time, storytelling has been a powerful medium. Mention a school
lecture and students react quite differently than when going to a school play. A
well-crafted story makes time fly on silken wings. Two full hours can vanish in
a heartbeat.Story energizes both fiction and
nonfiction. Though he writes on deep topics, Philip Yancy’s use of story pushes
his books to the top of the charts. He tells about childhood lessons, about
relationships and his own struggles. He grips his readers with emotion while
pouring his philosophies into their minds. Some nonfiction authors say, “I’m not
worried about fiction techniques. They don’t apply to me.” But the wise writer
knows better. Story pounds home a point like rhetoric can never do.
Story is a series of events that build to a climax which
fundamentally and irreversibly change the hero’s values. In short, every author
writes his inmost convictions about life. The substance of the story comes from
the heart of the author. Writing is risky business. It calls for someone with
the courage to bare his soul.
A writer must select a few incidents to show his hero’s
entire life—his hidden desires, his secrets, his Self. These incidents, or
scenes, are building blocks which fit together in a definite pattern. Scenes
form Chapters which make up Acts which produce the Story.
A Scene is an event that arouses specific
emotions and portrays a specific worldview. This event changes the hero’s life
in some way that touches his values. In the first scene of Reaping the
Whirlwind, Deputy Sheriff Trent Tyson finds a dead woman inside a locked
house. He recently lost his job with the Chattanooga police force for digging
too deeply into a case that a crooked police chief didn’t want solved. Instead
of drawing back when this new situation is treated lightly, Tyson continues to
investigate. He has to make a conscious decision based on his values.
A Chapter is a series of scenes that end on a
point of high tension. This can be good or bad tension. The hero may be feeling
great or he may be depressed, but something continues to pull the story forward.
The reader feels compelled to know how the situation will turn out.
An Act is a series of chapters that crescendo
into a scene that brings about a major reversal of the hero’s values. Typically,
books follow a three-act format. These acts should be well defined.
The first Act introduces the situation and ends with an
event that rocks the hero or heroine to the core. This event sets her on a quest
that surprises her and compels her, though she’d rather turn back. In the first
act of Jane Eyre, young Jane is in her aunt’s house and at school. She
gets a job at Thornfield Hall at the end of the first act.
The second Act follows the heroine through her
quest--with advances and setbacks. This is where Jane falls deeply in love with
Mr. Rochester. She meets her beautiful rival and wonders at Rochester’s moods.
In the end she agrees to marry him and is stopped at the very altar--the major
reversal at the end of Act Two.
The final Act brings the heroine to the Dark Moment when
all is lost. Then from the ashes comes the answer to everything she has yearned
for. This final interchange proves her mettle and changes her forever (for
better or for worse). When Jane Eyre stands on moral principle and leaves
Thornfield, she thinks Mr. Rochester is lost to her forever. She returns later
to find tragedy. Mr. Rochester is now blind. From the ashes of her lost hopes,
she finds what she’s wanted after all: Mr. Rochester needs her and is humbly
grateful for her presence. She can be all to him that she couldn’t be when he
was so proud. From tragedy springs life.
Each scene produces specific emotions, so a story is a
theme with an emotional pull. The greater the emotion, the bigger the impact.
Story structure resembles an inverted funnel to show
greater and greater pressures forcing the hero to make increasingly difficult
choices with higher and higher risks until his true nature lays bare. The reader
must see what he’s made of.
The hero must have certain qualities. He must want
something. This is his external goal. He must be able to fight toward his goal
to the far reaches of human ability. He must also have an internal conflict, a
point of growth in his values that the reader can understand and relate to.
Begin the story when the hero takes a baby step toward
his goal and slams into a brick wall. In It’s a Wonderful Life George
Bailey wants to see the world. College is his first step toward the goal. When
his father dies, George finds himself facing a brick wall. The story’s narrative
drive is found in the gap between the hero’s expectations and reality. Constant
struggle and endless reversals keeps the reader turning pages.
The hero’s hunger for the prize will determine how much
he’ll risk to get it. In The Fugitive, Harrison Ford was ready to give
his own life.
In order to portray the emotional journey of his hero,
the writer must select issues that grip his own emotions. He must live through
the joys and disappointments of his hero and deliver that emotion to the printed
page. Like giving birth, this can be a painful process, but the thrill of
creation outshines the anguish of labor.